Once Upon...Once upon a timeI had a genuine smiledOnce upon a timeI had friendsOnce upon a timeYou loved meOnce upon a timeI never criedOnce upon I timeI still had a heartOnce upon a time I was still saneOnce upon a timeI had a familyOnce upon a timeI could trust youOnce upon a timeThe world was perfectOnce upon a timeI was happy to come homeOnce upon timeI had a perfect lifeOnce upon timewas a long, long time ago.
Vladimir Tod Fanfic 3 When I awoke, I was on a couch. At least Dorian had the kindness to put me on something, instead of laying on the ground like an idiot. There were some loud voices coming from the kitchen, and so I listened in. "You can't do that Dorian! She's just a new vampire!" Scolded a voice, in a thick Russian accent. "Vikas, the girl is an orphan, she has no where to go! All her family is dead! No one would notice if she went missing." Dorian stated. 'What a great friend Dorian is...' I thought. "That is a lie! She has other family members!" Objected Vikas. It was like being in a court room. Although no one new I was awake yet. "I am her grea
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