Save a lifeWhere did I go wrong?I lost a friendHow did that happen?Why did you leave me?It hurts so bad right now.Please don't leave me.I don't want to loose you.I'll become lost without you.I know we had out fights,But through the bitternessI thought we had something.I stayed up with you all night.But now your gone,and I will be forever lost.If only I had known howto save a life....
Forever AloneI walk this emptystreet, so alone.so lost.I walk alone,but for a brief momentyou were there with me.for a brief momentI was happy.Then that moment ended,and I'm falling fromthe sky.No one will catch me.I'll have to save my selfand walk again...alone, forever.
Questions in poetic formHm...That hurt...Its likehaving myheart rippedout allover again...Why? Doesshe havesomethingI don't?Is she pretty?Is she nice?Do you stareinto her eyeslike you didmine?Do you kissher, like youdid to me?Does she loveyou like Istill love you?Does she giveyou somethingI didn't?Do her parentscare like minedid?Does she livecloser to youthan I did?Does your momlike her,like she did me?Do you hug herwhen she's sad,like you did to me?Does she giveyou something,that I didn't?Will you hurt her,like you did me?
SpaceI know I saidI needed space...But... will youPLEASE respondto my texts....cause.... I justwant to hearfrom you...I wonder ifyou still feelthe same wayI feel aboutyou....
TLoZ: A twistThe blood drippedfrom Link's blade.Had he really done it?Had he finally killedGannondorf? What a day! I must go tellZelda, and get herout of that retchedtower!He went glompingup the stairsto the tower.He entered thetower, but somethingwas off."Zelda? where are you?"He shouted in the room.When Gannon's last wordshit him, in the gut. You may have takenmy life, but I havetaken somethingtruly preciousfrom you. Link fell tohis knees.His best friendwas murdered.Before he evenhad a clue. I thoughtI was saving her,But I was reallyavenging her.
Tres poemsI think its funnyon how everyonedwells on thenegative thathappened intheir lives,but we neverthink of allthe positiveand happy inour world.---I wish peoplewouldn't callme prettywhen I wearmake up.I ,honestly,feel likeits an insult.Am I NOTpretty whenI'm NOT wearingmakeup?Maybe peopleshould stopputting so muchpressure onout-wardappearance,and put morepressure oninner beauty.---I miss you,but I bet youdon't miss me.You met a girlbetter, and prettierthen I am.I wish we werestill together,but I guess itsover.
ThoughtI thought youUnderstood me.I thought itwas you and meagainst the world.I thought iCould prove everyonewrong.I thoughtWe'd be together,forever.I thoughtI could trust you.I thought youactually liked me.I thoughtI was your'sOnly, forever.I thoughtit was loveI thoughtYou'd be different.I thoughtwe had a lotin common.I thought...But I guess...I was wrong.
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